Thursday 18 October 2012

Cinquain Poem

War
Violent, scary
Fighting, running, adventurous 
Pointless, afraid, innocent, brave
Contention

3 comments:

  1. i like your poem because neary i cried. i can tell when you wrote the poem, you thought about war.

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  2. I like how you thought about what the war would be and your expressed all of your feelings into a poem

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  3. Very poignant - some good words here. Dad

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